All Comments on 'Injustice'

by Elsie Grey

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Idealistic

Sadly in this world, our looks DO matter to most people. If you're old/overweight/tall/have an accent you will be treated differently. I try not to discriminate, but its part of life, certainly the less serious bits of it, and will never go. Nice poem though.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Sadly, true.

Some people just will never understand and can only perpetuate a distorted view of what's important. Nicely done. Thank you. LJ

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very familiar.

I know what you mean about society's fixation and criticism towards appearances. It's unfortunate but true.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
Elsie, I do understand

what you're saying. And it has been said many times before. If you don't mind a suggestion, I would like to make one. I think if you make this poem more personal (talk about injustices you personally know about) it would make a more powerful poem. In other words, describe some scene where you, or someone close to you, has been judged by their looks.

Keep writing!

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