All Comments on 'James Earl Ray'

this really is a pretty good poem. I would suggest that if you would post fewer poems (at once), your work might be read more. Personally, I get overwhelmed when there are a ton of them by the same artist all at once. Your work may not get the attention it deserves, you know?

Your rhyme scheme is pretty good, only feels forced in a couple of places, one of those is "monument" and its companion.

Just keep writing, learn and enjoy. You are more than welcome to join us in the Poetry forum. we have challenges and teach one another all sorts of poetic things.

best wishes,

NJ