All Comments on 'Just a Cliche'

What a powerful verse

You've offered us here!

Especially more so for a first submission.

Could use some minor tweaking

But this is well above average.

Can't believe as I catch up on my reading that I am the first to comment here. Use your verse as release from your daily grind and show us what else you've got.

Oh, and by the way,

Welcome to Lit!