All Comments on 'Kissed'

the sweetest potion in motion I have ever tasted...another one of your awesome love stories...now ...am confused...do you have 2 wives...[winks] blue

gin or chin?

No matter; the effect is highly charged with deep emotion. Now if I could only get my muse to keep sitting in my lap I might be able to do as well.

in the first stanza, drop the s on finger tips. A singular drop on a singular fingertip and this good poem is a teardrop better. You show some wonderful restraint and a touch of subtlety here. This is the best I have seen from you since the escutcheon smile...

jim : )

of this, sent me in chills..

so very sensual I think,

in ways only a heart can understand.

I loved it ... *kiss*.

-sGp-

awesome...

totally powerful and moving Buddy!

another good job!

T