All Comments on 'Late Leaves'

An excellent poem. I loved the imagery in this, esp lines such as 'my wax paper life' lots of colour here 'ruddy red cheeks''pumpkin orange hair'and 'pale yellow skin'

The different perspective seen here is good as is the rythmn. Great stuff!

Best lines - first lines-eye catching

None of them are bad

way it should be - good going

managed to bring all those colors to life, even as I stare at them out my kitchen window. Now if I only didn't have to rake them..sigh. Great job.

poetic mind...this is just delightful...ty...blue

Truly excellent.

Curiouswife

Great imagery ~ an excellent write!

....never looked better. Nicely done, sack. Sweetly sad just like Autumn is.

Tess

Nicely put together thank you for the work

du~

Just like the season. There's an undertone of sadness, the imagery here is lovely... thanks for sharing this one!

Ah, but Sack has a serious side too and it is shared with deliberate precision in this work. Well done.

pull me in, and the ending certainly shows the continous cycle. it's not your usual nature poem......nicely done...don

"wax paper life" ... stunning. ~Imp

but even nicer, in my opinion, without the last 2 lines. good work, sack

Captures the life cycles of Fall leaves ~ loved the almost visual images of red, orange, yellow leaves as they finally break down in nature's eternal way. Next year it will be ~ "Welcome Sweet Springtime," all over again.