All Comments on 'Let the Tide Wash Over Me'

I enjoyed your poem as much as I enjoy being engulfed by the surf. (~_~)

Nice imagery ...

More please ~

Enjoy this piece

Just a couple minor editorial suggestions

If I may be so bold ~

Change the first moonlight to moonlit, drop a couple of the I's, and make the last line of the first two strophs more similar.

See what you think...

I lie on the beach.

It’s moonlit, I wait

Wait for the tide

Need it, ache for it

Breathless I wait

The first waves reach my toes

Bubbles fizz up to my ankles

I smile, anticipation rising

The waves creep up, slowly at first

Rhythmatic… back and forth, back and forth

Heavy and full now, more frantic

The water splashes over my navel,

I’m enveloped, lost in a sea of

sensation… back and forth, back and forth

Like I said, just a suggestion...