All Comments on 'Light Switch Phase'

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SkinandSinSkinandSinalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks, todski

:)

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
i think

You could lose the three ands in the second to last stanza.

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SkinandSinSkinandSinalmost 10 years agoAuthor
:)

Thank you! :) *blushez*

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Good till the end...

Then you busted out with these GREAT lines.

percussive maintenance

Is often the best way to go

SkinandSinSkinandSinover 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you. :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well

You have an amazing talent my friend, in the poetic arts.

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What I write is purely fiction, merely an exploration of my mind's small, dark crevasses - whatever genre I choose is not a nod of consent for the events or character motivations contained in my work. Call it an outlet, call it my imagined perversions, call it what you will. I...