All Comments on 'Lil Vixen~'

When do you ramble? You always write the way you feel, and that is not rambling. Your thoughts are quite coherent enough when one reads further into them.

Very fun poem, LilDarlin!

God, you made me giggle. This sounds like me. Muahaha:)

You wicked woman, LOL! Loved this- tripped on the flow a little but still was an excellent read.

Be careful of those "an" words that should be "and".

As always, no harm meant.

got a little voice in my head fly swatter?

oh my this hit the chucklebone~

clever and excellent poem~

gleam in my eye~

eyes filled with a

wicked wicked lil gleam???

LilDarlin's been loosed upon an unsuspecting universe.....