All Comments on 'Listening?'

by Whispermuse

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ishtatishtatabout 19 years ago
Paying attention.

I enjoyed this but suggest 'passionate' be omitted.It doesn't seem relavent to the poem. One of the best two today.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
cute

and a handfull of truth, that is truth in your hand ...right? <grin> nice poem~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Very cute, and very much enjoyed :)

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