All Comments on 'little screams'

Strong and emotional words but i'd rather not say what I thought it was about, as I wouldn't want to offend if it is so personal.

the bitter tone here, but this doesn't feel as well constructed as some of your other poems.

I felt the image of the obelisks to be a bit too vague and couldn't see the connection to the rest of the poem.

I'll go with Chris on this; you've a strong emotional undertow that pulls but the words just don't feel that strongly connected.