All Comments on 'Lone Moon'

throws off the rhythm a bit. Read this aloud and that is more evident. I also would seek to eliminate the two "its" if you can...otherwise quite vivid, I liked the imagery.

At mournful memories

the old wolf howls,

while young join in

paying respectful homage.

Would have looked great illustrated with a wolf howling at the moon high overhead.

whatever happened to nwwolf I wonder...I think by leading him to this site...he found the pack of howlin females...nice pen...

Soft paws pounding

running over the soil

guided by the light

of moon rings coiled

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i'm thinking that *pounding* would be better to possibly say, "strike softly" and it will a more natural effect with nature. overall a nice piece art.......don