All Comments on 'lost?'

nice structure & flow ~ great imagery

What a different style and so creative too. Your muse sure was tickling your fancy on this.

but this line kicks ass:

to 'damn' many mental pot holes

***

that feels something like i would write.....don

something must of set

you a fire !

what use of metaphor you

have going here,

reminds me of ,

one bright day,

in the middle of the night...

....and so I am off to the

rest, if as good as this ?

I will need a chain

to smoke , LOL..

-sGp-

I had so much fun that night writing poems

and bouncing with you. This poem, was a riot

to read, and crazy ... just like us eh~

Thank you for the mention,

... you are a Sweetie Pie~