All Comments on 'Luna (Moon)'

by JCSTREET

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Beautiful.....

..in either language. I predict a red "H" will appear beside this one. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
FabUlous

This is pure poetry Carl... enjoyed this very much and thanks for the transalation.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
This

is the best poem you have submitted thus far. I love it. Very pretty, moves easily across the eye and over the tongue. Lovely.

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 20 years ago
thank you

for putting the spanish version first. I am trying to learn it and its coming along slowly, but this poem is just beautiful, and would be, in any language. I enjoyed it very much :)

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
The frightening frailty of thread

The frozen petals evoke another recent poem here. Touching, heart-breaking, and remarkable.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Beautifully...

...written JC, as usual, and tender without sap. Hope your computer difficulties are over. Be around, and thrill us with stuff like this! p.s. - If you speak French, I'll really be impressed!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I didn't know you were bi-

lingual?

: )

Great work as always.

" winters petals frozen in the snow"

Beautiful...

Good to see you back and posting my friend

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