All Comments on 'Magic'

but your poems don't appear to grow. I went and read a few of your other poems. If I were the addressee I would be delighted, but here on a poetry forum they are jaded and cliched. Look around you and read--there are splendid examples of how to hymn a lover without recourse to dull language.

I only write this because anyone can write one poem, but you have written many which makes me think you would like to write better Take a look at the poems on the site and the Forum and you may see how you can. Best wishes.