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by avrgblkgrl

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Lady ClarissaLady Clarissaabout 14 years ago
Nice debut...

...look forward to seeing more of your work.

fridayamfridayamabout 14 years ago
I like this too

and look forward to reading more. Ty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Messy and Beautiful

Gorgeous heart you have.

eadgboyeadgboyalmost 13 years ago
"drops of salt and sugar and cream and sunlight"

Delightful and beautiful imagery.

teknightteknightalmost 13 years ago
You...

...have a particular way with words. I like it.

cf23430cf23430almost 13 years ago
wow

Another great poem. So ....... hot. Keep up the good work.

Rosie_101Rosie_101almost 13 years ago
I see a one body that is two and the sweet messy love of a night completely lived.

Visions of you and me, babe. x

bigReadingManbigReadingManalmost 13 years ago
Lovely

Charming and literate.

OxfordDonOxfordDonalmost 12 years ago
so evocative

wonderful....very evocative!

NeonuroticNeonuroticover 11 years ago
Whew. Need a cold shower over here....

Very sexy, arousing imagery without being "porny".

TheMogul40TheMogul40about 11 years ago
One of my favorite

I loved the way you captured the "messyness" of great passion. Agree with previous comment - without being porny ...love that word. ...

Your writing are always very visual .. and I enjoy that element ...the rain, the well earned sleep, the leak ....I saw the night of passion... without seeing a picture ....

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