by steve porter
as usual, your words are very descriptive..I could envision the entire scene, but this work is a little different, good different :)
You're an ugly sick bastard who's a fake hypnotist and needs to go to hell.
oh, steve, you are disgusting, baby. lol
This is good poetry. Edgy stuff. I like it.
There's nothing disgusting or dirty in this poem. It just makes you feel that way when you read it.
So erotic with no obviousness. The best kind of eroticism. A great read!
(Anonymous, maybe you should stop reading the poetry here, you're going to have a heart attack - hopefully.)
of the content sets up nice dramatic tension. I was thinking maybe flipping inherent and danger might work more effectively. (but what do I know?) Thanks for the read.