All Comments on 'my daddys knife'

of the content sets up nice dramatic tension. I was thinking maybe flipping inherent and danger might work more effectively. (but what do I know?) Thanks for the read.

So erotic with no obviousness. The best kind of eroticism. A great read!

(Anonymous, maybe you should stop reading the poetry here, you're going to have a heart attack - hopefully.)

erotic and seductive and oh, so dangerous. I like this.

oh, steve, you are disgusting, baby. lol

This is good poetry. Edgy stuff. I like it.

There's nothing disgusting or dirty in this poem. It just makes you feel that way when you read it.

You're an ugly sick bastard who's a fake hypnotist and needs to go to hell.

as usual, your words are very descriptive..I could envision the entire scene, but this work is a little different, good different :)