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by Jayderayn

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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certainly created beautiful images for us all to share..thank you. I love trees and living in the country.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Very good prose poem. Again, here I'm concerned with all that line spacing; it's really not needed in a prose piece and is rather distracting as is. You've got some nice imagery you project onto the reader's mind.

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Polyamorous woman, writes for fun... Fiesty redhead who adores longhaired, freaky men who rock to the beat of their own drums (or bass... ;) ). Me? This sums it up beautifully: "I do not want to be the leader. I refuse to be the leader. I want to live darkly and richly in my...