by Carmilla234
Thank you for your nice comment! Yes, I'll probably write a few more but they might not be in this section, they might be in erotic poetry.
Have a nice day!
First off i would like to say that this is a beautiful poem that is definitively reflecting a heart of love. And also you kinda gave me and idea to a poem i would like to write because of this so thank you. i believe that if i was to make any criticism that it would be that you should never let others bend your thoughts that they break and never let your poetic heart stop beating. Even during heart break let your heart speak and lets its voice be known. sorry if i rant a little bit, i wanted to write for a really long time and sometimes my thoughts over whelm my mind and yeah i should probably stop here well have a nice day.
Thank you for commenting. I am glad you liked it. Stay tuned for my next poem! Should be published....sometime. Yeah, date is not set. Lol. Should be soon though.
Thank you for your nice comment. It really made my day. I am about to publish another poem, but it first needs to be edited and stuff. When it is finished, it will be published under the Non-Erotic section.