All Comments on 'Natural Order'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
wow

a poem about me? gotta love it

the grossest

modernity will

turn to a homely

tribute to

the passing of time, seriously

diadem spider...

covered in scrawls and

signals, cabalistic

communications

does not suffer from dead language syndrome and csscc, nice play

5ed of course

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
wow

one comment?, I'll quit commenting 'till the din dies down - sorry

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
A slice of reality

And not sugar-coated, either! Well done! I love the contrast between the artificial and the natural...and a spider's web is a delightfully humbling one! Love it!

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