All Comments on 'Need~'

excellent little piece

filled with pain;

verse raw writ,

it's all here

pain

hurt

loss

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Love the way this flowed into the emotion of poem~

From a 'jewel' of a poet~

I've said before Lil how you have a way of bringing words to life and you have not dissapointed me with this. What alot of people may not know is that a broken heart is more than just a metaphor it is physically painful, a gut wrenching feeling of intense pain and loss. I felt that in your poem, I felt the pain and thought you did a wonderful job with this one. So real and beautifully written.

almost gasping pace of this poem, but feel it is a bit repetitive and could bebefit from some trimming. Nonetheless, a heartfelt write and read.

I always enjoy reading your poems, LilDarlin. Keep on writing them, especially your erotic ones. I'll keep on reading them.