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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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This poem seems more poetic than some of your previous ones -- ivy on brick/like hesitant hummingbirds/rain on a fallow field.

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisteralmost 15 years ago
A beautiful awakening

I like v much. well done.

Fx

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