by kittyblack
Pretty good but you can't give it a catchy title? No title is like tossing out a line and hook with no bait; a title is like a lure and sometimes even a little light or clue about some detail within.
but I have to agree with LeBroz that the titles (or lack of them) detracts from the overall presentation of the poem. For example, in this poem you might take "saviour in blue jeans" as the title instead of the first line. Interesting and kind of funny poem. I had to look up the Latin, so I learned something too. Thanks.
Found this thru the "portal". Loved it! Printed it out to remember and think about. Thanks
http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22233429#post22233429
I loved the word hetaera excellent connections here with a religious twist to the mind of a searching soul. ISO? did not get the meaning and others may also hence, the power of the poem fades some. It is a interesting read. thank you for the journey