All Comments on 'Nursing the Drought'

Very real. Not sure about putting it in the erotic category. I don't really like this part:

there in the middle of my other “don’t talk about it” openings shit

blood piss I counted the three

thank you, giant dripping pussy, for the read and comment-- I agree with your view on that line, its language is too harsh, I wanted to mention the excrement and waste, not sure what words to use? As far as the Erotic category, I had this m,omentary lapse of reason, thinking that I needed to put an erotic lable on it to protect the eyes of the innocent from sexual content eh hem, forgetting I was on a porn site.

aye aye aye you are right, funny as I usually get nabbed for putting non-erotic on something that is meant to be provokative.

~anna

and its not really a problem, of course , is yuo are so fucking honest!! and some people do not know how to deal with that. GDP's comment also is honest.

I dont really like "that part", but its necessary to the rest of the work, showing what the young woman went through in her bloodquest.

sometimes you are too good for your OWN good ;)

xoxox

maria

this poem was mention on the thread 'New Poem Reviews'

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

I remember studying those damn tampon boxes, looking for where the clitoris was. Of course, they didn't show that.

Thanks for the poem, Anna. Vivid and evocative. --C.o.S.

Love the telling, showing and glimpse into reality.

Your a damn good poet !!

The point being ...

This as much as anything is a part of life. We color it, package it and sell it ... So Bravo my friend for staying true and honest in the pictures you so brillantly paint.

A wonderful piece

With a bit of an edge;

Reminded me of that moment

So many years ago

My pre-teen's concerns that something was wrong ~

The red stain unexpected

And in that wonderful innocence shows it to her Dad;

An unplanned trip to the store

Buy her first box of womanhood

And explain to her the joys of womanhood

That will be with her for another forty years or so...

Thank you for a grat coming of age; and thank you for the courage!

I have never felt less competant to comment other than to say aren't there two L's in Michele? - so I won't say anything other than wow!

o anna who swirls her words like delicious liquorish

I raise my glassy eyes to you to who to wit to woo

such a deep seed journal journey back my dear dear diary

I thank you for trip and for the stain torn page

past from past to forward future in the coming moments

of grils that dance to women

Your wrting always touches my soul. ~~thank you~~

looks like some of that creative vote disppearing to get you up there. hope you appreciate it, cuz this poem sucks

I felt a little diry reading it.

I felt a little diry reading it.

Extraordinary. That's an inadequate description, but will have to do; I'm not quite sure how to react. It's not erotic, but it's definitely sexual, in that no man could have written it.