by TallDude123
I don't usually leave comments. I'm not at all good at them. However your thoughts caught me. I think with a little work this could be beautiful. It is already, hauntingly so, there is just a few things that might need a bit of touching up in my humble opinion. I could be off.. "While walking on beach.." It just felt like it was missing something..
As I have said I found this haunting. The concept is there. I enjoyed it. I hope you will not take my critique as anything other than a friendly thought. Thank you for sharing. I hope to see more of your work soon.