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Cute live if I rimnt :>

Love the thought of my wife needing to be abused and seeing her cum from a black man doing it. Him telling her to tie me to a chair so I am forced to watch. Love seeing her begging him as he slaps her as he’s fucking her till she sobbing, calling him daddy and that he owns her. Love seeing her humiliated as he “allows” her to cum. Licking his cum off the floor as his friends laugh at her.

You would look so pitiful licking his feet.

Your two main poetic elements in the piece are rhyme and repetition. This is incredibly hot and has a more formal appearance than the other pieces I've read so far. The musical cadence reels me in.

When Daddy gets his cock out,

Baby girl begins to dream

Of getting fucked 'fore and aft

And filled full of 'Daddy cream.'

She's willing to deep throat him,

Give a special wet blow job

Daddy eases his cock in,

She swallows his hard, thick knob.

And then she goes on hands and knees

Her pretty arse in the air.

"Bugger me Daddy," she softly begs

"Gape my shit chute. I don't care."