All Comments on 'One Day'

Separation anxiety or loss,

no matter;

to the sufferer of the pain,

of love's insanity

You had me in tears with

this one ~ your words carry

such a raw emotion that it reaches

inside and touches my heart.

This was beautiful and your poetry

is blossoming.

Thank you my friend.

~ Jenn x

pats on the back <grin> your words wrapped in emotions brought out a very good poem. They can re write it, re-create it and critic it, but nothing replaces the feelings felt when written and relayed in such an honest poem, in such an honest way.

..still heats a simmering pot. I may take this a lil differently but I really like it a lot, it served as a reminder to me. I love the ending . If even in a dream,that day is waiting for its time to be 'today'.