All Comments on 'One Day'

..still heats a simmering pot. I may take this a lil differently but I really like it a lot, it served as a reminder to me. I love the ending . If even in a dream,that day is waiting for its time to be 'today'.

pats on the back <grin> your words wrapped in emotions brought out a very good poem. They can re write it, re-create it and critic it, but nothing replaces the feelings felt when written and relayed in such an honest poem, in such an honest way.

You had me in tears with

this one ~ your words carry

such a raw emotion that it reaches

inside and touches my heart.

This was beautiful and your poetry

is blossoming.

Thank you my friend.

~ Jenn x

Separation anxiety or loss,

no matter;

to the sufferer of the pain,

of love's insanity