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tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
THE KNIGHT REFUSES

the damsels quest and request TK U MLJ LV NV

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Missed commenting yesterday on this

This is very nice indeed. The combination of structure, repitition and plain words works very well indeed to convey the poignancy.

It is good to see you flexing your muscles and varying the styles and messages.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 10 years ago
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That is so poignant, I like your rhymes and near rhymes. Thanks for the read and 5ed

MagnetronMagnetronabout 10 years ago

You created an amazing structure by making those 'with you' stand alone. Repetition is indeed your ally on this one.

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