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by Cagivagurl

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun8 months ago

5 Stars Beautifully written

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy8 months ago

Yes, I felt it!

5

blackrandl1958blackrandl19588 months ago

Very well done. Thank you for the... seasoning. Flame seasoning! Randi

OzeminotaurOzeminotaur8 months ago

My senses are feeling it

Beautifully written I'm not normally one for poetry but I really enjoyed this

laptopwriterlaptopwriter8 months ago

The lady can write!

MigbirdMigbird8 months ago

Enjoyed the tumescence; pace perfect. Two asides: Almost starting singing Carole King’s beautifully erotic love song upon reading your first line. Maybe an inspiration? Also: Poem also resonates for me if “did” changed to “do”. Just wondering out loud. Really like your prose; nice to see another poem.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeff8 months ago

Excellent, excellent! Great job, cagivagurl.

OzeminotaurOzeminotaur7 months ago

It looks like you may get recognized as the best poet

Cracker270Cracker2705 months ago

I am not normally a fan of poetry. I think you might change that.

offkilter123offkilter1234 months ago

Derivative and trite.

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