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Click hereDid you feel the earth moving...
Train rumbling through the tunnel.
Did you feel the moisture on your dainty finger tip.
The parting of the waves, the baring of the soul.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
The goosebumps rising, your heart beat pounding
Oh did you feel the light upon you
The waves crashed down upon you
Folds of flesh unfolding, like flowers colourfully exploding.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
Did you feel the coming.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
Your skin flushed and burning
Did you feel the fire searing the rising of the swell
Did you hear the voices singing. Calling out your name.
Your fingers enquiring, exploring depths familiar.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
The sticky gooey residue of another fiery flame.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
Did you feel your muscles tighten, the blood boiling in your veins
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
The waters rising, the wind swirling through your senses.
Enquiring fingers opening the dam, encouraging the release.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
Did you feel the headlight burning, bathing you in light.
Light racing towards you, cutting through the night....
Then it’s upon you, like a beast gripping and twisting, ripping out your heart.
Exposing the combustion of burning desires.
Did you feel it...
Did you feel it...
Enjoyed the tumescence; pace perfect. Two asides: Almost starting singing Carole King’s beautifully erotic love song upon reading your first line. Maybe an inspiration? Also: Poem also resonates for me if “did” changed to “do”. Just wondering out loud. Really like your prose; nice to see another poem.
My senses are feeling it
Beautifully written I'm not normally one for poetry but I really enjoyed this