All Comments on 'Origami'

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HottieOlwenHottieOlwen2 months ago

Oh my dear DampKitten friend, your

Rhymes always hit the spot

I'm in awe of your creative

Genius, which really is red hot

And if I may, I would suggest more of the very same

My 'kitten' gets wet, not damp

I think that you're to blame!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Paul4playPaul4play2 months ago

An intimate poem of dependence,

Then loss;

An unfilled void.

Unmoored.

melimelissamelimelissa2 months ago

This is absolutely beautiful. Your clever writing charms me

JodieTodayJodieToday2 months ago

That's some deep stuff Meg...love it.

A sexy perspective and some powerful creating lover...words escape me for the moment but I doubt you suffer from that problem. Nice.

AnaDarklingAnaDarklingabout 2 months ago

This poem is beautiful!

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Thirty-year-old nurse, mother of two. I love erotic poetry... and HOT SEX. I also like doing physical exams on hard men in good shape. And sometimes, I swing the other way.