All Comments on 'Our Love'

A beautiful love poem! Very heartfelt! Very lucky is the one who receives it! Good work!

Your first submission, so I'm sorry to be negative in feedback.

A love poem (for public viewing), is I think, one of the hardest things to write - because love poems are so common - who has not written them at some time? Thus, a love poem really needs originality or a fresh angle for the general reader to enjoy it. Your poem certainly succeeds in the expression of the narrator's feeling, but it did not, for me, do it in an interesting or engaging way. I felt the sentiment's to be bland and unexceptional, when they should have been sharp, or witty or sublime.

Thank you for your input :) I wrote this to my girlfriend (who loved it) and we wanted to share it so we decided to post it on here. We know the love we have for each other is a love some others never have and want to share that it is possible and sometimes even where you least expect it... And not always under the most ideal circumstances.... But true love can endure all if you stick by it's side..... And this is part of why I write... Sorry if it's not captivating enough for some but I know anyone that has what we have will more than likely understand and enjoy every feeling I write about :D there are more to come..... My name is luncky_n_love because that's what we are.... The luckiest people in the world to have each other and each others hearts and soul