All Comments on 'Pagan Thaumaturgic Thanatopsis'

by VareseNocturn

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WillowedCabin over 12 years ago

As far as first submissions go

This was memorable. There is a lot in here that I loved...but I'm not sure about its format and rhythm. It was easy to get lost. I need more coffee for further comment.

Angeline almost 12 years ago

like a jackson pollack

So dense and filled with words and layered with meaning. I am more of a minimalist--or try to be--so this is not really my cup of tea. However there is no denying that you are facile with words and have a clear poetic vision. I am sorry I didn't see this poem sooner and I hope you will post more or write on the forum.

Cheers!