All Comments on 'Paper Doll'

which sort of reminds me of a "dramatic monologue," a poetry form where the narrator reveals more of him- or herself than the suject of the poem. I do think it could stand some editorial changes to tighten it up, but overall it's good writing and a very interesting little story.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

I enjoyed reading this easy to see the poor girl broken and abandoned although it's not an easy subject to stomach

This sort of message delivered in a manner befitting the subject — raw, gritty, and hard-edged.

Let me guess you slap your wife or girlfriend around for a shit poem lik this you must be, you should and every one like are truly the onse that deserves to go to hell and rout there.