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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

so very touching and deep

KitschshamanKitschshamanover 8 years ago
beautiful

This touched me, as I find myself in the same space ...

TonguemeisterTonguemeisterover 11 years ago

heartfelt and touching

HenryHenryover 11 years ago
Enjoyable

Very enjoyable, would love to read more.

novicevnovicevover 11 years ago
Feel

I can feel how you feel. That's what a poem is supposed to do...you got mad talent.

PS: I always have a difficult time to connect to other peoples feelings ...so that says a lot about your talent.

jackdawjackdawalmost 12 years ago

Thoughtful and sensitive; I like it

george51george51over 12 years ago
Style and thought

I think your poem is superb.

It captures your thoughts and

feelings, which surely is what

poetry needs to do?

It demonstrates your mood

is perhaps a better way of

putting it.

Thank you.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 12 years ago
FYI

Your poem is mentioned in the recommendations thread in the Poetry Forum.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
WAITING FOR INCARNATION

and the one sure way to repudiate. TK U MLJ LV NV

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