Pride

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When you realise you can't live without her
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Arking
Arking
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Loneliness is a cloak I will wear
A deep shade of blue
When you are not there
I don’t want to live
Without you anymore
I give of myself
And walk to your door
So many times
I have opened your gate
I see you in there
Peering, but just out of sight
A shadow, just maybe
But I am not sure
Are you hiding like me
I maybe like you
Two stubborn souls
Just trying to control
What neither of us can do

Arking
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ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you variscite32. I'm so glad it found a spot with you

variscite32variscite32over 2 years ago

Very deep, I love it!

ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Paul, you are such a wonderful foil for me. Your thoughts and critics are most welcome. Thank you very much. xx

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Pain and yearning; uncertain of where to go or what do next.

Rudderless.

And yet, you capture that emotion and portray it here for us to share with you.

ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much Pixie. I truly love your feedback.

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