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PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years ago

The resonances here echo. That sense of "no, I won't, not me, she should" is evoked so well - and the loneliness with both causes it and perpetuates it. Your poetry is from the heart Bobbi xxxxx

ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much Pixie. I truly love your feedback.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Pain and yearning; uncertain of where to go or what do next.

Rudderless.

And yet, you capture that emotion and portray it here for us to share with you.

ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Paul, you are such a wonderful foil for me. Your thoughts and critics are most welcome. Thank you very much. xx

variscite32variscite32over 2 years ago

Very deep, I love it!

ArkingArkingover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you variscite32. I'm so glad it found a spot with you

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