All Comments on 'Roots n Shoots'

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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
and bent

on the experiment -

This is something different alright!

kokshurkokshurover 11 years ago
way to go harry.

Stretch the form, or stretch the forum.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E

Look again

and then rhyming couplets that make perfect sense, what are you saying?

anyway this is a reach

Oh Fuck, I am a bohemian hedonist!

I like this:

Crawl on

In ancient Egypt I find my name

Astonishment reigns

chalk it up to a failed experiment, 5ed because it is so bizarre.

shorten the reach

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
USING CRATES OR STACK OR HORDES OR HERD

the truth is still there....there was a bunch. TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
So crates

that's pretty funny :) The rest of it is too avant garde for me, a simple plebeian.

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