All Comments on 'Sasori (Scorpion)'

Nice little prose piece...

Different.

Thanks for your writing Hippokrene.

Tess

mentioned on the thread New Poem Reviews

forgiveness? but then, why would a scorpion need to be forgiven for being its true self, :) seems thatthe monk is a slow learner, or

he had no sense of pain, wish I could be that way...

it doesn't read like a poem. At least not in my opinion. Still, it's interesting and I like interesting...