All Comments on 'Searching For You'

nice read, conveys

hope very well.

Enjoyed it,

Thanks.

~ J

Poor thing. Thinkin we have all been there at one time or another.Loved this sad lil poem. I can feel your pain, your wishing and your hope.. Wonderful flow~!

can be sheer torture and you have expressed what we all have probably felt more than once - I know I sure have. You achieved conveying the anxiousness; then the optimism of knowing he misses and is missed in return. And then, realizes all is right with the world for another day.<smile> Great job on this your first poem submission. On behalf of the poems side of the Lit neighborhood, we welcome you!!!

Welcome Wagon Vixxx

This is a sweet poem ~ But I do believe she was busy and her boss was busy buzzing around her hive....

:kiss:es

~Honey

guess that it is over