All Comments on 'seductive river'

very good

use of wood

and water

this line does not blend as the others do

"like silken ribbon"

lure of curves

she lie(s)

like [silken] ribbon

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on the new poems thread.

I was just curious, how can a "flooded pool" protrude? I have difficulties visualizing that! Otherwise, an economy of words, delightfully placed. You are quite the poet!

I bow* to you an your imagery~~!! Awesome use here.

Just love this poem Art. It shows~ an tells.. **Bravo**