by My Erotic Tale
I bow* to you an your imagery~~!! Awesome use here.
Just love this poem Art. It shows~ an tells.. **Bravo**
I was just curious, how can a "flooded pool" protrude? I have difficulties visualizing that! Otherwise, an economy of words, delightfully placed. You are quite the poet!
very good
use of wood
and water
this line does not blend as the others do
"like silken ribbon"