All Comments on 'See Thru Me'

I think you could cut it back some and make it a more effective poem. I especially like the second strophe which is pretty packed with interesting imagery, compared to the rest of the poem.

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poem Review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)

The fourth strophe is {in my mind} the weakest part of your poem; it says explicitly much of what has already been implied. It feels redundant compared to the rest of a much stronger 3 strophe poem.