All Comments on 'Seed'

by SilentMercy

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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I like this although I don't think the capital letters are needed for extra emphasis, not sure if 'sprung' should be 'sprang'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I agree with the previous comment that the use of too many capital letters detracts from the poem, and 'sprang' would be preferable, being grammatically correct. Otherwise, it's a very good effort.

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