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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
If I read......

......this correctly M/s, masturbation and musicality all are here.

"It makes her keen and wail with the best -" might read more smoothly as " It makes her keen, wail with the best" - there are one or two stumbles in the rhythm here and there but - well done.

Tess

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
lovely

it has soft rhythm and was a pleasure to read. The rhyme is non- invasive, smooth and easy to read. Good work

~ maria

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
Go the Masturbation paean!

I love a good masturbation piece and this one is pretty damn cool. Great conceit.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...