by oggbashan
I especially like the first one. I'll confess to enjoying and admiring some particular pieces of free verse; but in general I agree entirely with what you said about it. And I appreciate the form in which you said it. (On blank verse I have to say, it's great when it doesn't get in the way. Much of Shakespeare, say. But if it's saying too loudly, "Hey, look, I'm in meter [or metre, if you prefer!], that's a problem.
Thank you for digging back in your archives to post these!
-- Wil