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WilCox49WilCox49over 4 years ago
Very nice indeed

I especially like the first one. I'll confess to enjoying and admiring some particular pieces of free verse; but in general I agree entirely with what you said about it. And I appreciate the form in which you said it. (On blank verse I have to say, it's great when it doesn't get in the way. Much of Shakespeare, say. But if it's saying too loudly, "Hey, look, I'm in meter [or metre, if you prefer!], that's a problem.

Thank you for digging back in your archives to post these!

-- Wil

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 4 years ago
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It takes a good poet to write a Triolet that makes sense, well done!

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