All Comments on 'Simply Addicting'

I wanted to make sure to give you some feedback, since you asked for some. The poem is a bit wordy. I think instead of constructing a whole list of features that you like, you'd do better to select the most important ones to you and why they are important. For example, does he have strong arms that wrap around you like a security blanket? After you decide which features you want to focus on and why, trim the wording to make your thoughts clear and concise. Using my example, I might say:

"Arms of gentle power-

security blanket on a dark night"

Now, I'm just one poet-- not an authority on poetry by any means. You may find the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum helpful.