All Comments on 'Slow and Deliberate'

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely turned, sounds like you put your tongue in it! good to have you back

good grammar, clitoris's is perfect for possessive, well done

"Although plural nouns that end in s take only an apostrophe, singular nouns that end in s take an apostrophe + s – the boss's office, James's dog, Lois's friends, Mr. Jones's car."

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago

nice, tight, concise

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
tinglingly ....

exquisite .......erotica !!!

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