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by Carletto47

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nice try

needs better vocabulary i.e."what you are about to unload."

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago

I'm not sure it's warm and wet before a storm, but I liked your sentiments.

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